tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7281862008032625866.post2144984488987542222..comments2023-10-30T15:33:49.515-04:00Comments on Archie's Gender & Pop Culture Blog: Blog Assignment 1Archiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12816667413946202853noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7281862008032625866.post-58807758355824325892011-11-21T01:36:21.317-05:002011-11-21T01:36:21.317-05:00finance Assignment help is offered by assignment ...finance Assignment help is offered by assignment help for students of Australia, UK, USA, Canada, UAE and other countries studying in high school, college or university from its online expert tutors.<a href="http://pearltutors.com/" rel="nofollow">Income statement assignment help</a>bur gerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04144481446330029153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7281862008032625866.post-7116073298745707672011-07-19T18:31:33.752-04:002011-07-19T18:31:33.752-04:00Archie-
Interesting TV show choice and good episod...Archie-<br />Interesting TV show choice and good episode to focus on for your first blog post. Your analysis makes several great points; however, you've got a similar set of structural/clarity-based issues to work on as a number of your classmates.<br /><br />One of the key areas that needs to be cleared up is your thesis. The thesis should use the terms of the assignment (i.e. masculinity and/or femininity) in relation to the choice of characters used for the analysis. <br /><br />The primary issue with your quotes here was that they needed to be introduced and contextualized in a sentence (quotes can't begin and end their own sentences) and formatted in MLA style. <br /><br />The following outline can be used as a reference point (the numbers indicate the paragraph sequence) to structure and order a basic, written analysis:<br /><br />1. Intro Paragraph (with thesis at the last sentence)<br /><br />2. Point A (your first point/assertion that supports your thesis)<br /><br />3. Point A with quote from "expert witness" (author cited through the use of a direct quote to back up your point/assertion made in paragraph 2)<br /><br />4. Point B (your point/assertion that supports your thesis that can be directly linked with point A, so that your transition from point A to B is logical and adds depth to your analysis)<br /><br />5. Point B with quote from "expert witness" (author cited through the use of a direct quote to back up your point/assertion made in paragraph 4)<br /><br />....<br />.... repeat the steps above until your points have been made and you've adequately proven your thesis.<br /><br />#. Conclusion (after all points have been made)<br /><br />For the alpha-numeric grade, see the "gradebook" section of SOCS; however, for the more specific breakdown of points, click on the link for "assessments" to view the "TV Analysis" rubric that was used to calculate the grade you see in the gradebook section. <br /><br />- JessieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00882202558089495129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7281862008032625866.post-3030110482684681152011-07-16T11:12:53.832-04:002011-07-16T11:12:53.832-04:00Archie,
Your blog post was very clear and to the p...Archie,<br />Your blog post was very clear and to the point. I could plainly see the examples you used as well as how they related to class. I feel like the only person in the world who has never watched Degrassi, but from what I’ve heard, this episode is just as dramatic as everyone says the show can be. I noticed a couple run-ons and one or two spelling errors, but nothing that distracted from the message you were trying to get across. I liked the examples you used, but maybe a few more from the episode could have given us a little more to understand about the characters. Overall, I think you picked a great episode for this assignment and did well with your analysis. <br /><br />-TarahTarahhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01149099637495646334noreply@blogger.com